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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2011, 01:15:44 AM »
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It needed more sex, didn't it?

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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2011, 01:48:42 AM »
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LOL! Sex sells in today's world man. I'll give this a read when I have more time. Right now I need to stop being a night owl and get some sleep.
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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #3 on: August 24, 2011, 03:18:33 AM »
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That's a shame, because I think gratuitous sex would actually hurt the story in this case.  The motif I was going for with Lydie was "Diabolical Ojou-sama," which I think is perfect for her design. 

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ojou

The thing is, Ojou-samas are supposed to be young ladies of refined elegance.  Tasteless sexfiendery doesn't really factor into that characterization well.
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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #4 on: August 24, 2011, 11:33:41 AM »
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I agree that adding 'sex' into the story might hurt it since Bartly's back story isn't about sex but rather more of a tragedy as it was in the Bloodlines instruction manual. As soon as I get home from work I'll give this a read.
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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2011, 06:44:12 PM »
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Just read your story and found it very interesting. It's also interesting that Bartly's ghost now inhibits Lydie and Maxim never knew what hit him. Although I am curious as to what happened to the vampirekiller after Juste was changed. It would no-doubt scar him if he even tried to touch it so I'm guessing it remains in the spot where he last wielded it.
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« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2011, 07:17:09 PM »
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Re: How is reincarnation of Elizabeth Bartley formed?
« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2011, 11:52:02 PM »
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Although I am curious as to what happened to the vampirekiller after Juste was changed. It would no-doubt scar him if he even tried to touch it so I'm guessing it remains in the spot where he last wielded it.
yeeeah, I'm going to edit that part out since it didn't go anywhere anyway.

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