Considerably better. There still could do with some minute detailing, though. If you look at Richter's idle animations in RoB/DXX/any game where he's sleeveless, you can see that in the third frame of his "exhale" that his arm "moves" forward by extending the forearm and shortening the hand by one pixel. His back muscles also roll in tandem with this movement. Of course that would be more hidden in a thicker undershirt and frock coat, but it would still be there. You've already got a bit of it, but it might need that little extra push. It's hard to tell without that arm extension, though.
But that one definitely looks better than the first. Keep it up. And I think I have Hanz's sheet on my hard drive, so I'll look. If I don't, I'll pop in the CVBla boards and see if I can get them from Serio. He's usually cool with older, finished sheets, so long as they were his to begin with (hence why nobody can get their hands on Cyber's Nathan sheet; Serio doesn't share what isn't his, and Cyber doesn't want them floating around either), so I should be able to get you what you're looking for.
Also, Bhunivelze's done. Finally.
As for his disproportinate looks, Zero...that's actually the way he looks. In-game, his body is very elongated. It's almost at the level as Alucard in Hellsing (Alucard...level...heh). The fact that he has two heads (the other on the back of his front one), and that massive horn headpiece crown thing, only serves to make him look even wonkier. But since he's got that Vedic
Rakshasa vibe going on(now that I think about it, Bhunivelze shares a lot of traits - though downplayed - with the
Rakshasa king, Ravana; only two heads instead of ten, but his eight wings and two arms are reminiscent of Ravana's twenty arms), that's somewhat justified.