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« on: July 31, 2015, 01:20:42 PM »
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I'm a hobby writer, in that I don't write for publication (working on that though).
I thought it'd be neat if we had a thread where writers could congregate and share ideas or samples of our writing.

Poetry, prose, fiction, nonfiction, fanfiction... if you're writing, it's welcome here!

I'm writing several projects at the moment, and I'll just list them so that you can really SEE how I tend to overexert myself with my favorite non-gaming hobby.



1) The Prometheus Engine, a science fiction novel with Bradbury and Herbert influences. My official description from my blog reads:

In “The Prometheus Engine”, Mankind is exploring a planet called Nemesis, which was discovered approximately 1,000 years ago, and its orbit now home to the vast majority of humans in the Sol system.

After a horrific attack from the planet’s surface leads to the deaths of almost half a billion humans living in orbit, and a key scientific expedition goes missing after encountering a mysterious set of ruins similar to ones found on Mars, the colonies send a team to investigate, and request reinforcements from Humankind’s other colonies.

What the investigation discovers is a group of Martian stragglers, the last holdouts of an ancient and once-great and mighty empire— holdouts who will do anything to secure an old dominance, and do not care how many humans are harmed to make their dreams a reality.

Humans also discover alongside the Martians a legacy from the world’s creators, called the “Cloak of Responsibility”, which could endow whomever uses it with unimaginable power, and a terrible burden to match.

Blinded by mutual greed, both species race to locate the Cloak, never truly realizing the implications of the curse that comes with Responsibility, the greatest power in the universe.




2) Red, a science fiction short story about a socially hopeless boy, Liam, and Red, his AI Gynoid girlfriend.



3)The Duskverse, a series of alternate history paranormal romance novels in which Vampires have integrated into society successfully but now face racial and classist persecution in much of the world. My debut novel, "Life Begins At Dusk" is part of this series and currently in the editing/proofreading phase of writing. The story primarily follows Colin, a human, and his vampire lover Jeanne, an Imperial Guardswoman for the Empress of Austria, as they try to generally make things work. Supporting characters include a pack of Siberian Werewolves, and a sinister conspiracy to trigger a war between vampires and humans for mysterious reasons.

Castlevania references abound, with Vlad Dracula as a key antagonist (though hardly the only one), Carmilla Karnstein as the (benevolent) Queen of the Vampires ruling out of Austria, and Waldihar Berinhard (a more appropriately old German form of "Walter Bernhard") as the inventor of the Berinhard Substitute, a concoction derived from Pig's Blood that allows vampires to digest human food effectively, ensuring relative peace between the two races.



I'm really excited for all three projects, and look forward to finishing them so I can share the complete versions with you.

If you write, I'd love to hear what you've got running in your own projects.

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« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2015, 06:09:51 PM »
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I'm also a hobby writer of sorts. That and I have many writing projects on the go right now. However my creative abilities have been dwindling as of late and this has reduced my writing down to to simply editing my works which helps to flesh them out a bit. I've only ever completed one story out of all my works (not counting my fan fics). However this particular story is a bit of a mess now as I wrote it a long time ago and my skills at writing have evolved dramatically since then. The story that I did write and finish is titled Star Trek: The reckoning. And it was in response to that train wreck Paramount pictures calls Star Trek: Generations. It was also inspired by William Shatner's two books; Ashes of Eden and The Return. But like I mentioned before the story is a bit of a mess since I'm going over the early chapters. I'm almost convinced that I'll have to simply re-write them as correcting them seems to be more damaging then beneficial. That, and they are just painful to read  :P

Another book I started writing not long ago was a Star Trek/Star Wars cross-over (it has no real title at the moment). It primarily takes place in the Star Wars universe some 80 years after Return of the Jedi. In the Star Trek universe the story begins in the year 2344. Roughly before the time of the battle of Narendra III where the Enterprise C was destroyed. The main character, Rear Admiral Bethany Cyrus is good friends with Enterprise Captain Rachel Garrett. Bethany volunteers for a transwarp experiment near the edge of the milky way galaxy. However they are ambushed by Cardassian ships and Bethany's ship is forced to flee. The unforeseen effect happens when utilizing the untested transwarp engine whilst traveling through the Galactic barrier. This opens up a rift in space/time which hurls the ship into the Star wars galaxy by accident (Sent to the distant past and billions of light years away). The book only has two chapters at the moment but throughout the story Cyrus works towards her goal of returning to Earth.

Another story that currently has three chapters is titled The Hessian Legacy. This is in response to Tim Burton's movie Sleepy Hollow (which I love to death). I came up with the concept of the Headless Horseman returning to menace a modern-day New York and that a NYPD detective/Wiccan practitioner woman named Nicodemus Crane (the descendant of both Ichabod Crane and Katrina Van Tassel) would set out to solve the mystery.
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« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2015, 07:08:21 PM »
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Hessian Legacy sounds pretty ace, actually. I'd read it, and my family would probably too (they love the TV show, Sleepy Hollow to death).

Given the popularity of that show, there might be a real market for that book. WRITE WRITE WRITE!!

I have a pet project (other than the three I listed) tenatively titled "The Champions Saga" and went unlisted because I have nothing solid written for it, it's a well formed idea, but I haven't done much work, so I didn't list it alongside the stuff I DID have work done on.

The Champions Saga is a superhero team story, about a team called, you guessed it, the Champions, who, if you drew a triangle, put the Avengers at one corner, the Guardians of the Galaxy at another, and then The Runaways at the final corner, would land somewhere closest to The Runaways, with lots over overlap with the Guardians, and a little overlap with the Avengers.
They are a superpowered vigilante group that typically operates entirely outside the law, and the US Government brands them terrorists for it, but they're pretty well loved by the man-on-the-street.

They go through several lineups as the story progresses and as team members leave or die, they get replaced by new recruits. The various members and their abilities are (across three separate story arcs-- they never assemble in such a group all at once):

Nano (Quentin Black): A boy transformed into a gestalt nanomachine being in a freak accident. Abilities include Malleable Form, Technopathy, Matter Repurposing
Phoenix (Salakh-a-Maktesh, aka Walter Morn): A long forgotten Pharaoh of ancient Egypt given a form of immortality by the gods. He will always resurrect moments after a given death, with a set of random skills.
Ash (Kimiko Winters): A teenage witch who specializes in setting things on fire, whether she wants to or not. Can also change into a crow.
Spectrum (Kelsie Summers): Gifted with the ability to control emotions and physics by generating and projecting light from across the visible light spectrum. She can't stop glowing either.
Brickwork (Kara Natalie Hendricks): Canadian high school dropout, former mob thumb-breaker, at the age of 17 she can lift a fully laden semi-truck and hurl it, and is immune to physical damage.
Warlock (Gavin Stonebanks): A gifted hacker who secretly uses low-level magic to enhance his skills.
Patriot Knight (Captain Franklin Scott) A representative from the United States Air Force appointed to ensure the Champions stay on the level. Has a fully powered armored flight suit and various weapon systems equipped to that end.
Talon (Kale Murdoch) A robotics and engineering prodigy who uses an exoskeleton of his own design to increase his physical strength and speed, and a detachable jump-glider backpack to move around. Said backpack can be operated remotely as a camera drone and has small scale firearms for limited air support.
Nexus (Qannenda'raaya'marnix, aka "Raaya"): An alien outcast from the stars, Raaya possesses highly advanced reality distortion abilities, able to bend and mold reality like clay when she can stay focused.
Mordred (Mordred Grayle): Recruited during a tough time for the champions, Mordred is a powerful vampire of the Dracula-esque persuasion, able to transform into a swarm of bats, fog, or smoke, command mastery of the animals of the night, manipulate storms, and lift objects 3 times his size. At night. In sunlight, he can walk around and not die.
Lashwolf (Skrrreeeeeeee!!): Nobody knows what Lashwolf even IS. At rest, resembling a green oil slick, Lashwolf can bond to a given host an amplify their abilities. Capable of operating on its own for brief periods, during which time it resembles a manner of extraterrestrial canine, Lashwolf tends to jump from host to host during a fight, lending increased powers to its comrades in need.

They face various villains, from evil nanomachines and psychological vampires to government agents, the President of the United States, and on a few occasions, members of their very own.


Regrettably, I have nothing more written on the saga, but I at least know the characters and what they are like.
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« Reply #3 on: July 31, 2015, 09:48:36 PM »
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I write poetry, or did. Haven't had the desire to write for some time. Most of it is of a highly religious Christian nature, SO BEWARE.

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I've tried writing short stories before but stopped only a few pages in out of frustration. I just need to push through and see an idea to the end, then edit it later to make it decent. It's the only way to grow as a narrative writer, but I'm scurred.
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« Reply #4 on: August 01, 2015, 12:01:31 AM »
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The frustration I feel every now and then is the infamous writer's block. It's not so bad now seeing as I have been practicing writing for years now. However occasionally it will crop up and impede my progress. It was really bad when I was working on my first story The Reckoning. this was back when I was in Junior high school. Eventually I managed to get through it and triumph (at the end of highschool  :P). I think right now I am going through another phase of writer's block. It's the only explanation I have for my lack of motivation. Believe me LumiRockets I want nothing more then to finish my work but it'll take a while from the pace of things at the moment.
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« Reply #5 on: August 01, 2015, 03:53:12 PM »
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As I'm sure most of you know, I write mainly fanfiction, almost exclusively my magnum opus, Wayward Son:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3133712/1/Wayward-Son

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« Reply #6 on: August 01, 2015, 11:29:03 PM »
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« Reply #7 on: August 02, 2015, 01:22:50 AM »
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I do quite a bit of writing myself. I was in the process of writing a Castlevania crossover series a looooong time ago (back when I was... I think 14 or 15?), titled Castlevania: Overture of the Rift. I wasn't that great. It had some decent concepts but it also had a lot of bad decisions (like a romance sub-plot between Soma and Charlotte) and while it did get better as the story went on, I just kinda got burnt out on writing it since there were too many characters so I stopped it. I wrote about 18 episodes (as it was intended to be an animated webseries), but I lost the last six so I only have 12 scripts. Every six episodes was a new arc with a different villain, but the series mostly focused around Soma, Alucard, and Simon. Maybe if I retype them on a blog or something I'll share them with all of you.

I'm also writing out a script for an RPG, tentatively titled "Defiance: Truth and Betrayal" that sorta began as an old-school knight saves princess story but wound up becoming bigger. The whole thing is pretty convoluted, but let's just say there's a lot of darknessness in it.
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« Reply #8 on: August 02, 2015, 11:31:16 AM »
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Yeah, when a story starts to become to big to keep track you need to sit down and come up with a plan to help organize things so the you don't get lost. Somewhat  like manga artists/writers do when they come up with a story so they don't get sidetracked. I kinda have this issue as well. Especially with my first story. Though what helped immensely was keeping my focus on the primary characters as they were integral to the story itself. The secondary characters (though important as well) I kept in the semi-foreground. In the end it all worked out.
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« Reply #9 on: August 02, 2015, 12:19:09 PM »
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Yeah, when a story starts to become to big to keep track you need to sit down and come up with a plan to help organize things so the you don't get lost. Somewhat  like manga artists/writers do when they come up with a story so they don't get sidetracked. I kinda have this issue as well. Especially with my first story. Though what helped immensely was keeping my focus on the primary characters as they were integral to the story itself. The secondary characters (though important as well) I kept in the semi-foreground. In the end it all worked out.

Ever keep a Story Bible? Where you just do a whole lot of background work, figuring out the world and how things work, and then just put all of that in one spot where you can refer back to it so nothing contradicts anything else? I've done it on a few occasions, and it works like a charm. Like... nine out of ten times.
How not to be a dark lord: the answer to that is a terribly interesting answer that involves an almost Jedi-like adherence to keeping oneself under control and finding ways to be true to yourself in a way that doesn't encourage the worst parts of you to become dangerously exaggerated and instead feeds your better nature. Also, protip: don't fuck with Alchemy or strike up any deals with ancient Japanese Shinigami gods no matter how tempting the deal or how suavely dressed the Shinigami is.

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« Reply #10 on: August 02, 2015, 08:23:39 PM »
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Sufficed to say I've never made one. It would definitely help keep things in order. I'll have to try this out if I ever do a big project someday.
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« Reply #11 on: August 03, 2015, 02:11:39 AM »
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Way back in 2005, I made a Castlevania themed one with a friend entitled Cygneus Mortualia: Requiem of Souls pt1. It is most likely lost from the internet when the CV Dungeon was reformatted. And I believe it is a good thing since my friend who had the plot outline lost the sheet (yup, way too old school using sheets of paper) and I couldn't continue the story since a lot of real life things happened and we are no longer in contact, thus, it will forever be in hiatus. I no longer want to write fanfiction after that. I'd just rather read the works of others.

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« Reply #12 on: August 08, 2015, 03:09:37 AM »
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I wrote a prologue/framing narrative. Enjoy.

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"These proceedings," began Senator Fredericks, "Might go considerably easier if you would not behave so antagonistically towards the commission, Mister Murdoch."

"I've told you, repeatedly, sir, that's not my name. It hasn't been for a long time."

"Well, you can't honestly expect me to call you by your vigilante alias... Talon, can you?"

"I don't expect it. I demand it."

"You are speaking to a United States Senatorial Commission that holds your life in our hands. I'd advise you to speak with a little more respect, Mister Murdoch."

Talon slammed the table with both hands, rattling his handcuffs and startling all present.

"I'm sorry. Talon."

Talon smiled.

"And you expect me to show deference. You bible black fools living on the nightmare ground, wearing symbols of oppression of the masses around your necks. You who play tough, but double back the moment someone shows force where you failed to expect it. Your titles are jokes. They mean nothing to me, nothing to the world I inhabit and operate in." Talon's dark eyes fixated on Senator Fredericks, "A world, which it so happens, I am currently unable to make safe because some idiots in a suit decided to question me today."

"We're just trying to find answers--"

"You're not. Stop pretending you are. I lost a brother while you were trying to find answers. While you were trying to find answers, Gabriel Vargas walked into Prism City and killed and oppressed countless individuals, scarcely earning an offhanded verbal condemnation from you. The Army, who fucking work for you, created the AMX-8800S Draugen Wolf Automated Sentinel System after The Champions dealt with Vargas. Which, in point of fact, I bring to your attention because The Champions had to clean up that mess too. A mess, called "the utter destruction of Las Vegas", that you made. To be fair, you did hire us after that one. And then after we blew the whistle on the damn largest criminal conspiracy in federal history, your government tried to put us in prison to await execution. Not only did we break out, we dealt with that conspiracy too. For free."

"You and your freaky friends KILLED THE PRESIDENT OF THE UNITED STATES."

"We did not. We arrested him for trial, but he died during transport. Your own people corroborated that statemen--"

The Senator now had his turn to bang the table.

"Indeed. It was very conveniently timed, I must say." he said, regaining his composure.

"Let's be perfectly clear Senator. I have never believed a word you said. You have already made it clear that you won't believe anything I say. Execute me, or don't. I have no plans on wasting my breath here."

"Believe me. I want to. But before we do, and we will-- you are going to give us answers. A complete picture."

"I'd rather you just shoot me here and get it done with."

"We don't always get what we want, Mister Murdoch." Fredericks said with venomous edge.

"Don't I know it..." Talon mumbled, "Fine. I'll play, just so we can get to the good part sooner. How complete a picture do you want?"

"Let's take it all back to the beginning. Take us to the beginning of The Champions."

"Shit. It's gonna be one of those inquiries." Talon groaned, "I'll say what I know of the beginning, so long as you know I was not physically present for these events until much later."

"Acknowledged, mister Murdoch."

Talon sighed.

"I hope you brought your history books and an eraser, because there's some serious revisions you need to make here..."

Let me know what you think.
How not to be a dark lord: the answer to that is a terribly interesting answer that involves an almost Jedi-like adherence to keeping oneself under control and finding ways to be true to yourself in a way that doesn't encourage the worst parts of you to become dangerously exaggerated and instead feeds your better nature. Also, protip: don't fuck with Alchemy or strike up any deals with ancient Japanese Shinigami gods no matter how tempting the deal or how suavely dressed the Shinigami is.

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« Reply #13 on: August 08, 2015, 11:30:51 AM »
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Religious corrupt zealot arguing with a free nation senator? Sounds interesting.

Here, I might as well put fourth my first chapter of Hessian Legacy. Enjoy.

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« Reply #14 on: August 08, 2015, 01:43:01 PM »
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Religious corrupt zealot arguing with a free nation senator? Sounds interesting.

Talon's hardly corrupt, but he is a zealot for Justice. Think Frank Miller's version of Batman, utterly unable to lay down arms and retire from fighting the good fight (this especially works because Kale Murdoch was originally envisioned by me as a Batman fanfiction character who served as a successor to the cowl 50 years after Bruce Wayne's death of old age -- he'd be mentored by Superman in the original fic as Superman was the last remaining hero who knew Batman personally).

Senator Fredericks is meant to be a judgmental prick, but one with an understandable line of reasoning. He starts the story utterly convinced that Talon and the Champions are the biggest threat to national security since 9/11, but over the course of the story, it falls to Talon to explain why he's wrong, or, at the very least, not as correct as he thinks he is.

Fredericks is also unaware (at the beginning) that his daughter Ashley (hero name "Nema") is also a member of the Champions (and also half-Fathom --the Fathoms being a submarine breed of humans that live under the seas).


On another note, Hessian Legacy gets off to an amazing start! Not so sure about that last line, it seems kind of clunky and inelegant, but other than that, I didn't notice any errors (though I wasn't exactly LOOKING for them either).
How not to be a dark lord: the answer to that is a terribly interesting answer that involves an almost Jedi-like adherence to keeping oneself under control and finding ways to be true to yourself in a way that doesn't encourage the worst parts of you to become dangerously exaggerated and instead feeds your better nature. Also, protip: don't fuck with Alchemy or strike up any deals with ancient Japanese Shinigami gods no matter how tempting the deal or how suavely dressed the Shinigami is.

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