I will be sincere, its a little hard these days to me be at the right mood to stop and read something, but I've only entered in this site and seem the amount of pages that you have there, with this amount of pages this story should have a lot of possibilities (if I know you, almost all will be tragic for some chars xD) and thats also mean that you put your time and heart in this story, I dont see how could that be a bad story then.
IDK if thats what you wanted to hear/read but since Im not in the right mood, thats all that I can say for now.