Keeping it PG-13 is fine, but remember this; when someone, man or woman, becomes a vampire their sex drive is kicked into high gear. Higher then whats normally obtained through Kama Sutra.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival)
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival)Sort of. You should continue it. Have save Richter and defeat Dracula together (Unlike in the game) and then have them become lovers who make sure that there is always someone to defeat Dracula. As for Maria feeding, have her go after criminals. She could make them bleed into a glass and then drink the blood from the glass. This way she stays feed, but doesn't turn anyone else. If you time skip into modern times, have her drink synthetic blood.
Would you say I handled this pretty well?
Would you say I handled this pretty well?
It's nice, but needs more tentacle action. :P
A stone basin of holy water toppled to the ground. Terrified clergy members ran left and right as the village church was razed. The dark priest Zead watched contently as his skeletal helpers carried out their brutal campaign, occasionally pointing or waving his arm to direct them to a new victim. His sinister delight was only interrupted when he felt a set of slender fingers chop across his shoulder. The strike was weak, probably delivered by some foolish mage who had convinced themself they were a fighter. After only suffering from some slight annoyance, Zead narrowed his eyes and casually turned his bald head to the source of the attack. When his eyes focused on the remarkably brave (or incredibly stupid) individual who had lashed out at him, his smile then quickly returned. He had found his true target.
Angela glared toward Zead with an unusually stern expression, holding her ground with some sort of amateur martial arts stance. She was a blonde-haired young woman, somewhere in her late teens or early 20's, and her attire stood out from that of the other church workers. Whereas her associates were adorned in full cloaks and various religious regalia, Angela's outfit was noticeably more revealing. The short white and blue dress left much of her legs, midriff, cleavage, and arms uncovered, and the draping sleeves and sash she wore conveyed her role as a ceremonial dancer. This clothing still held a certain refined look, however, and was accented by a gold trim. It gave her an appropriate angelic look.
Zead wasn't threatened by his opponent's bravery in the slightest. He snapped his arm forward to remove the crucifix that hung from the dancer's neck, then carelessly tossed the trinket away. As Angela gasped at his inhuman cunning, his opposite hand lunged forward to take a hold of the fabric choker adorning her neck. With his icy fingers wrapped around her throat, he easily lifted her into the air. His arm ceased moving upward when the toes of her long white boots began dangling and hopelessly reaching for the floor.
Zead chuckled softly before speaking to his new captive.
"So, you're that pesky girl who's been helping the Belmont."
Both of Angela's hands had locked around the dark minion's forearm by now, pulling and clawing as she attempted to free herself. Her determined expression briefly turned to fright when Zead dropped his human disguise. For barely a second, his grinning face transformed into an empty skull, revealing the priest's true form of Death incarnate. Angela quickly regained her composure, however, and questioned her enemy through grit teeth.
"What of it, you monster?"
Zead's mischievous smirk grew wider when he replied.
"The master requests your presence."
Before Angela had a chance to question him further, he abruptly tightened his grip around her throat. He called back his army when his prey slipped into unconsciousness and went limp in his grasp.
and now she would be perfect psychological weapon against his greatest enemy.
"be the perfect" you meant?
I wonder why Dracula would bother to go to the dungeon himself instead of having Angela brought to him
but then again he did visit Annette personally.
It also did allow you to have Angela kill the nun as well.
Because it would have been dangerous to let Angela out before he was sure he had her completely under control.
"After spending almost two years constantly fucking with the heads of fictional teenagers, I figured it would be fitting to go out with a Freddy Krueger reference."
Dunno, but is decapitation your forte?I've cut the head off an anime girl or two in my time.
If I wrote a story where one of the Castlevania girls somehow gets converted into a flying Medusa head, would that be sexy or would it just make that character really annoying?
On another note, your fanfiction is quite hard to appreciate for someone who doesn't know any of the animes / mangas you base your stories on.Sadly its true, but I think its a normal trait of fanfictions.
Oh well, if you don't mind whipping out the guillotine then go right ahead.I've never actually used a guillotine in one of my stories.
They will have bad breath because of that?
I was expecting something more of a mature rating from you...
It was nice for a Teen rating.
I don't write porn.
Well, aside from that one time I wrote that one Mai Otome porn story for AFF.net. But aside from that, I don't write porn.
wait, why do people actually like this?
You're supposed to be repulsed and disgusted. I'm a failure of a troll.
that's icky.
Maybe I'm trolling you by convincing you I failed at trolling you.
That or maybe I was just caught off guard by Shiroi's ability to be even more horrifying than me.
Shiroi should write some Super Waffle fanfictions :)
http://talesreserve.forumotion.net/t1283-luke-and-natalia (http://talesreserve.forumotion.net/t1283-luke-and-natalia)
How does this sound for my next fanfic idea?
How about an idea where Random female Castlevania character + Magical creeper mummy bandages = Evil Egyptian-themed version of random female Castlevania who serves as one of Akmodan's priestesses / backup dancers / whatever?
Also, guy on Hongfire says I shouldn't bother writing about the Castlevania idea because it's too similar to the Final Fantasy X-2 idea. Your thoughts?
How about an idea where Random female Castlevania character + Magical creeper mummy bandages = Evil Egyptian-themed version of random female Castlevania who serves as one of Akmodan's priestesses / backup dancers / whatever?
Ah, that is better.
Ah, that is better.
okay okay
Now what if
what if I took a turn for the dark and wrote something where one of those annoying imp things from PoR attaches itself to Charlotte's brain, and then Charlotte / Imp-Thing-Attached-To-Charlotte's-Brain sadistically taunts Jonathan for a few seconds before making her kill herself? Sort of like this (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8388460/1/Geppetto) but with Castlevania characters.
I would love to see a sequel you could make bad end with Annette and Richter or heck even Maria from Castlevania X
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7226856/1/Bloodbath (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7226856/1/Bloodbath)