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The Castlevania Dungeon Forums => Fan Stuff => Topic started by: Super Waffle on August 22, 2011, 11:20:51 AM
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7312115 (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7312115)
Vaguely based on this thread: http://castlevaniadungeon.net/forums/index.php?topic=3519.0 (http://castlevaniadungeon.net/forums/index.php?topic=3519.0)
what a twist
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It needed more sex, didn't it?
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LOL! Sex sells in today's world man. I'll give this a read when I have more time. Right now I need to stop being a night owl and get some sleep.
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That's a shame, because I think gratuitous sex would actually hurt the story in this case. The motif I was going for with Lydie was "Diabolical Ojou-sama," which I think is perfect for her design.
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ojou (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Ojou)
The thing is, Ojou-samas are supposed to be young ladies of refined elegance. Tasteless sexfiendery doesn't really factor into that characterization well.
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I agree that adding 'sex' into the story might hurt it since Bartly's back story isn't about sex but rather more of a tragedy as it was in the Bloodlines instruction manual. As soon as I get home from work I'll give this a read.
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Just read your story and found it very interesting. It's also interesting that Bartly's ghost now inhibits Lydie and Maxim never knew what hit him. Although I am curious as to what happened to the vampirekiller after Juste was changed. It would no-doubt scar him if he even tried to touch it so I'm guessing it remains in the spot where he last wielded it.
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Left you a review Waffle-sama :D
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Although I am curious as to what happened to the vampirekiller after Juste was changed. It would no-doubt scar him if he even tried to touch it so I'm guessing it remains in the spot where he last wielded it.
yeeeah, I'm going to edit that part out since it didn't go anywhere anyway.