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Title: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 21, 2011, 04:10:31 AM
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7657198/1/ (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7657198/1/)

goddamn Konami coming up with goddamn alternate character designs that I think are really nice and worth writing goddamn borderline erotica about

I swear to god this is exactly what happened when I wrote "Revenge."

I'm going to be listening to Big Arm or some shit if anybody needs me

goddamn.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Munchy on December 21, 2011, 07:32:34 PM
Well, you put a woman and a flower in one of those teleportation pods from "The Fly".
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 21, 2011, 08:02:39 PM
You're thinking of Alraune. 

(http://i43.tinypic.com/99qwyo.jpg)


Ailorumnas are those witches that float around firing their lasers at you.

(http://i41.tinypic.com/34e68sw.jpg)
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 22, 2011, 08:18:32 AM
Okay, I read it and liked it, but I have one question. I haven't played the CV64 games...is the stuff about Hecate and the Belnades/witches mentioned in the N64 installments, or is that your own idea? :D
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 22, 2011, 10:52:34 AM
Original idea.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Mooning Freddy on December 22, 2011, 11:37:40 AM

Ailorumnas are those witches that float around firing their lasers at you.

(http://i41.tinypic.com/34e68sw.jpg)

Do they shout IMA FIRIN MAH LAZOR beforehand?
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 22, 2011, 11:46:10 AM
Naw.  They just kinda backdash around in the air and throw sparkly things at you, as shown at about 6:35 into this video:


Castlevania: Portrait of Ruin Walkthrough (Dark Academy Pt. 23) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iz2eu6aBsIw#ws)


And thank you for reading my fanfic, people who aren't Gunlord.

Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 22, 2011, 10:25:44 PM
Hey ;_; I left you feedback both on here and FFn ;_;
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 22, 2011, 10:51:05 PM
I wasn't really sure what to say since your comment on FF.net told me to read your comment here, and your comment here just said you thought it was hot.

Uhhh... so Gunlord, what did you think was the hottest part?
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 22, 2011, 11:24:41 PM
The sensual description of how the prophetess turned Sypha, like how she kissed her and stuff. You know I'm into that, Waffle-kun 8)
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 22, 2011, 11:58:09 PM
You thought Sypha drinking acid from a shrunken head was hot?
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 23, 2011, 02:23:50 AM
No, I may have misworded that, I meant this line:

"The prophetess reached forward and slowly lifted Sypha's hood over her brow. She then leaned forward to plant a loving kiss on top of the younger mage's shrouded head."

Mmmmm-mmmmm....girl on girl, u KNOW gunlord's all about dat. 8)
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 23, 2011, 04:19:24 AM
It's just a kiss on her forehead.  A sign of affection.  You know, a like grandmotherly-type thing.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 23, 2011, 10:13:50 AM
Yeah, but she's no grandmother, she's a sensuous, erotic witch. Mmm-mmmm ^,~
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 23, 2011, 03:13:57 PM
By the way, the ringleader witch could potentially be Actrise.  Just, you know, not dressed all Victorian era-like because that wouldn't make any sense in CV3's time period.  It actually fits pretty well when you consider how she spends the majority of CV64 trying to recruit Carrie due to her witch heritage.

I considered outright saying it was Actrise while I was writing it, but then I decided I was kitbashing canon enough as it is and just made her be Generic Immortal Gray-Haired Witch.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 23, 2011, 04:46:23 PM
Actrise...is that another CV64 character? I really gotta play those games sumtime ~_~
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 25, 2011, 11:07:28 AM
This is how SomethingAwful responded to this fanfic:

http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3436999&userid=0&perpage=40&pagenumber=139#post398876532 (http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3436999&userid=0&perpage=40&pagenumber=139#post398876532)

It appears they did not like it.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: VladCT on December 25, 2011, 03:34:22 PM
This is how SomethingAwful responded to this fanfic:

http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3436999&userid=0&perpage=40&pagenumber=139#post398876532 (http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3436999&userid=0&perpage=40&pagenumber=139#post398876532)

It appears they did not like it.
So they hate rape that much? I'm guessing that they don't like NTR and mind breaking either.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 25, 2011, 03:55:51 PM
The weird part is there isn't really any rape in this story.  And, unless you want to make it more Freudian than it already is and say Sypha is stealing Alucard from his mom or something, I'm not really seeing the netorare part, either.

Yeah, there's plenty of mindbreak and Indiana Jones (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/journal/Half-of-everything-is-luck-James-275757375) in it, but not really rape/NTR.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: VladCT on December 25, 2011, 04:42:35 PM
The weird part is there isn't really any rape in this story.  And, unless you want to make it more Freudian than it already is and say Sypha is stealing Alucard from his mom or something, I'm not really seeing the netorare part, either.

Yeah, there's plenty of mindbreak and Indiana Jones (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/journal/Half-of-everything-is-luck-James-275757375) in it, but not really rape/NTR.
I didn't say that it was NTR, I was just mentioning the most common dark fetishes.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Gunlord on December 25, 2011, 07:21:32 PM
Did they actually ban you, waffle? o,o
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 25, 2011, 07:43:49 PM
http://tales.namco.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=89952 (http://tales.namco.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=89952)

yep.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: VladCT on December 25, 2011, 08:16:30 PM
I was going to say something about the "don't be a dick" rule, but then I just remembered that we have a similar rule over here. :P
Oh, and while I'm not exactly fond of your writing, I do think that the ban was unjustified.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 27, 2011, 11:44:35 AM
How do you guys feel about the new part I just added to the fanfic?
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Las on December 29, 2011, 09:24:29 PM
Aliorumnas i think are salem witches. You all probably know the story on them right? Now the alura une's are totally different. From what i read on them they are women eaten by deadly flowers who instead of totally devouring them morph into them. At least i think that is how it goes. One of the ds games i think has a defeintion on them. Also the fan-fic sounds like a dramatic script for a movie. ????
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on December 30, 2011, 05:10:01 PM
Well it was completely ripped off of like 50 bajillion movies, so that's probably why.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Super Waffle on February 17, 2013, 01:18:38 AM
So does anyone have any suggestions on what Alucard and Sypha's inevitable kid might be like in this batshit alternate universe?

It's an important thing to know.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Jorge D. Fuentes on February 17, 2013, 07:58:28 AM
Hmm... dark powers + light powers...?
I suppose he would be some kind of Cecil-type character, where he has a dark mode and a light mode, and in his story he would have to balance out those inner powers.  He would be some kind of anti-hero like Alucard.  Probably shunned.

Well, as Cornell says "Not all creatures of the night are evil".

Also, yeah you probably should've just said "Salem Witch" which is how I know 'em.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Kale on February 21, 2013, 07:46:11 AM
Yeah, but she's no grandmother, she's a sensuous, erotic witch. Mmm-mmmm ^,~
da fuq?

I mean, girl on girl is hot, but that's not even close to sensual.
Title: Re: How is Aliorumnas formed?
Post by: Lelygax on February 21, 2013, 10:01:31 AM
Sypha + Alucard + Time Travel and exchange of babies = Juste Belmont