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The Castlevania Dungeon Forums => Hardcore Gaming 101 => Topic started by: Super Waffle on July 25, 2014, 01:23:30 PM
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Gunlord said I should make this thread since http://castlevaniadungeon.net/forums/index.php/topic,4303.0.html (http://castlevaniadungeon.net/forums/index.php/topic,4303.0.html) is too old to bump. I don't really have anything to talk about other than this:
http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Debugging-the-System-2-0-Sophiacendence-468329897 (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Debugging-the-System-2-0-Sophiacendence-468329897)
http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/journal/My-god-It-s-full-of-anime-girls-469123609 (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/journal/My-god-It-s-full-of-anime-girls-469123609)
uguu.
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uguu~ indeed ;)
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Gunlord I don't think they like it.
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T_T
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What. You mean the psycho girl? Is she from Star Ocean?? I only have the original two games remade for the PSP.
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Yeah, the psycho girl. Do you like her? Do you think I made her psycho enough?
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Her cutie-ish exterior will betray those who no not what to look for, and that's probable the scariest thing about her. Although in reality there are a lot more f**ked up people that would make her a saint by comparison. however if you really want to see a messed up sociopathic monster in the guise of a cute girl then look no further then Nui Harime from Kill La Kill. That is one f**ked up chick!
try not to freak out when you see her Super Waffle :-X
http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131213012823/kill-la-kill/images/e/e0/Killlakill_ep11_nui_harime.png (http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20131213012823/kill-la-kill/images/e/e0/Killlakill_ep11_nui_harime.png)
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You haven't read a single thing I've posted, have you? :/
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I did, however we're talking via the internet so not everything is understood well.
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I retconned some things so this is Evil Sophia's design now
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Does this make the fanfic more interesting y/n?
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I retconned some things so this is Evil Sophia's design now
Does this make the fanfic more interesting y/n?
I know nothing about Star Ocean or about fanfic or anything like that. But I do know one thing or two about vertebral columns, and this girl sure has a REAL problem going on there xD
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I think the only thing that is missing for this new evil Sophia is a set of crazy-looking eyes. I've seen some anime chicks that look like innocent girls but when they show you their eyes your guts begin to twist like Twizzlers.
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Better?
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LOL! I wasn't referring to eyebrows. Those just make her look angry. What I meant was the pupil itself. Giving the pupil a kind of look you wouldn't normally see on a sane person just to help better define the character. Something to indicate that they've snapped deep inside. That kind of thing.
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Take your pick.
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The twinkle eyes give her that dazzled look. The empty white eyes remind me of Red Falcon's mutated human soldiers (Don't shoot till you see the whites' of their eyes). I think the red eyes would work when she works herself into a blinding rage. Then she'd go apocalyptic on everything @_@;
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http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-x-Star-Ocean-3-The-Visitor-478867953 (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-x-Star-Ocean-3-The-Visitor-478867953)
This is Gunlord's fault.
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LOL!
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He should have said "BELIEVE IT" before he died T_T
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Okay, I honored Gunlord's stupid request for making Naruto say the "Believe it" line.
I still don't understand what difference that makes.
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It needs to be all caps ~_~
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I guess there's no-pleasing some people :-\
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Fine then, let me show you how such a fanfic should be written.
Sophia elsteed (or whatever her last name was) was evil and brainwashed. She came to the Naruto World and killed everyone horribly, erasing them from existence.
"BELIEVE IT!" Naruto screamed, before she decapitated him and then annihilated every trace that he ever existed.
Then Naruto was no more and everyone lived happily ever after.
A SUPER WAFFLE/GUNLORD PRODUCTION
THE END
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Isn't that what I wrote?
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"BELIEVE IT" wasn't in all caps, waffle-kun. That was the most important thing ~_~
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Nevermind.
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la dee da nothing to see here.
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http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Star-Ocean-3-The-Hot-Springs-Episode-from-Hell-491508707 (http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Star-Ocean-3-The-Hot-Springs-Episode-from-Hell-491508707)
I saw your comment on FF.net, Gunlord. I wish you had given me more feedback than "D:"
"D:" doesn't tell me much. "D:" doesn't let me know how I can improve as a writer.
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But the story is a D:...it's tragic T_T
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So how can I make it less D:?
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Have Sophia defeat whoever the villains are and then have her and her friends live happily ever after.
Also have them kill Naruto (who says "BELIEVE IT"--all caps is important, remember) somewhere along the way.