Topic: The ''help me write stuff'' thread

[Super Waffle]

Alucard bumps into a vamped Maria while wandering around Dracula's castle

And then...

I'm not sure.

Where should I go with this potential fanfic idea?


p.s.:  No, this is not a lead-in for a porno.  Keep it PG-13.

[Mooning Freddy]

Alucard: Maria! So, we meet again! Despite my warnings, you refuse to leave this place! Enough! It is time for you to get a taste of my bloodline!  
Maria: Never will I submit to your demonic powers!
Alucard: Ah, but you remain, and the place is having its effects on you! I am left with no choice but to purge you with my holy water!
Maria: No! I must not face your cursed bloodline!
Alucard: Too late for that Maria! Behold my true form and DESPAIRRRRRR
Maria: NOOOOOO  

[X]

Keeping it PG-13 is fine, but remember this; when someone, man or woman, becomes a vampire their sex drive is kicked into high gear. Higher then whats normally obtained through Kama Sutra.

-X

[Super Waffle]

Keeping it PG-13 is fine, but remember this; when someone, man or woman, becomes a vampire their sex drive is kicked into high gear. Higher then whats normally obtained through Kama Sutra.

-X

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival

Would you say I handled this pretty well?

[X]

No doubt 

-X

[darkwzrd4]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6860267/1/Late_Arrival

Would you say I handled this pretty well?

Sort of.  You should continue it.  Have save Richter and defeat Dracula together (Unlike in the game) and then have them become lovers who make sure that there is always someone to defeat Dracula.  As for Maria feeding, have her go after criminals.  She could make them bleed into a glass and then drink the blood from the glass.  This way she stays feed, but doesn't turn anyone else.  If you time skip into modern times, have her drink synthetic blood.

[Mooning Freddy]

Would you say I handled this pretty well?

It's nice, but needs more tentacle action.   

[X]

If you time skip into modern times, have her drink synthetic blood.

Just have her drink pig's blood like in the movie 'My best friend is a vampire'. It's almost if not identical to human's blood.

-X

[Super Waffle]

It's nice, but needs more tentacle action.    

How exactly would that fit into the context of my story?

[TheouAegis]

Voyeuristic Buckbaird? (This goes for the tentacle thingy, although that's taking this out of PG-13 unless you're going ultra-softcore).

[Super Waffle]

Okay, next order of business.

I want to write a story describing how Angela actually becomes evil, a plot point ill-addressed in the stupid, awful, horrible Pachi-Slot games.

http://castlevania.wikia.com/wiki/Angela

Any ideas or suggestions?

[Super Waffle]

In the off-chance somebody is actually interested in this crap and just didn't feel like replying, here's a preview

A stone basin of holy water toppled to the ground. Terrified clergy members ran left and right as the village church was razed. The dark priest Zead watched contently as his skeletal helpers carried out their brutal campaign, occasionally pointing or waving his arm to direct them to a new victim. His sinister delight was only interrupted when he felt a set of slender fingers chop across his shoulder. The strike was weak, probably delivered by some foolish mage who had convinced themself they were a fighter. After only suffering from some slight annoyance, Zead narrowed his eyes and casually turned his bald head to the source of the attack. When his eyes focused on the remarkably brave (or incredibly stupid) individual who had lashed out at him, his smile then quickly returned. He had found his true target.

Angela glared toward Zead with an unusually stern expression, holding her ground with some sort of amateur martial arts stance. She was a blonde-haired young woman, somewhere in her late teens or early 20's, and her attire stood out from that of the other church workers. Whereas her associates were adorned in full cloaks and various religious regalia, Angela's outfit was noticeably more revealing. The short white and blue dress left much of her legs, midriff, cleavage, and arms uncovered, and the draping sleeves and sash she wore conveyed her role as a ceremonial dancer. This clothing still held a certain refined look, however, and was accented by a gold trim. It gave her an appropriate angelic look.

Zead wasn't threatened by his opponent's bravery in the slightest. He snapped his arm forward to remove the crucifix that hung from the dancer's neck, then carelessly tossed the trinket away. As Angela gasped at his inhuman cunning, his opposite hand lunged forward to take a hold of the fabric choker adorning her neck. With his icy fingers wrapped around her throat, he easily lifted her into the air. His arm ceased moving upward when the toes of her long white boots began dangling and hopelessly reaching for the floor.

Zead chuckled softly before speaking to his new captive.

"So, you're that pesky girl who's been helping the Belmont."

Both of Angela's hands had locked around the dark minion's forearm by now, pulling and clawing as she attempted to free herself. Her determined expression briefly turned to fright when Zead dropped his human disguise. For barely a second, his grinning face transformed into an empty skull, revealing the priest's true form of Death incarnate. Angela quickly regained her composure, however, and questioned her enemy through grit teeth.

"What of it, you monster?"

Zead's mischievous smirk grew wider when he replied.

"The master requests your presence."

Before Angela had a chance to question him further, he abruptly tightened his grip around her throat. He called back his army when his prey slipped into unconsciousness and went limp in his grasp.

Is that a pretty good intro, or should I completely start over?

[Gunlord]

It's a good intro, Super Waffle. I'd say go with it.

[uzo]

Not bad. Makes me think of Zead walking around like Xehanort from BBS, directing but never acting personally until the target is found.

[Super Waffle]

tbh I haven't actually played any of the games where Death uses his Professor X disguise, so I have no idea whatsoever if he's in-character in my story.

But, to me, Death was always that guy who just sort of hangs out in his clocktower all day until someone walks up to him and is like "COME AT ME BRO," so I suppose it's close enough.