Topic: Remix's, need some input

[BMC_War Machine]

Hey folks, so my little sis is doing some artwork for a convention and is doing a wicked Richter pic, not sure if she is doing more but so far it looks amazing!  She asked me yesterday if i minded if she used some of my tracks for it, naturally i was cool with it, but wanted to remix them again since ive gotten new gear/improvements etc.  So she wanted Vampire Killer and Slash.  Not sure if she's needing more or not, i'll find out later today lol, but here's what i've got:

Vampire Killer:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/56sbo7gdz2iaxds/Vampire_Killer.mp3/file

Slash:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8v5jd7nnjj01nyt/Slash.mp3/file

[VladCT]

>Vampire Killer
The violin in the intro part got drowned out by pretty much everything else, I feel.

>Slash
Doing the intro part at a lower key with a harpsichord threw me off quite a bit.

[BMC_War Machine]

Thanks for the input! 

[KaZudra]

From a critical standpoint;
Instrumentation is very clean, composition is amazing, but the mixing does need work; All the pieces are there, but those pieces don't quite fit together just yet.

[BMC_War Machine]

From a critical standpoint;
Instrumentation is very clean, composition is amazing, but the mixing does need work; All the pieces are there, but those pieces don't quite fit together just yet.

Thanks Kazudra! 

[BMC_War Machine]

Ok folks, see if these sound better to you:

Vampire Killer:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/fc2qhq362i9559z/Vampire_Killer_v2.mp3/file

Slash:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8o36xjt2td3u5rd/Slash_v2.mp3/file

[Dracula9]

Ok folks, see if these sound better to you:

Vampire Killer:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/fc2qhq362i9559z/Vampire_Killer_v2.mp3/file

Slash:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/8o36xjt2td3u5rd/Slash_v2.mp3/file

main melodies on every instrument (on both tracks) except VK's synth need a volume increase