What software are you using to record?
The reverb is really really strong. Like, 'giant metal tank' strong.
You generally only want 10-15% reverb. Once you climb up past 25% it starts getting all mucked up. Trust me on this, I've learned to ease off on reverb in the last few years (though I keep it on cave themes, orchestral hall arrangements, and EarthBound trippy music).
The composition seems great (is this a rip or did you compose it yourself?), and so is the instrumentation... though you said it would be fully orchestral, and this has some synth in there that's quite modern. But yeah, the reverb. It's messing up the pieces....