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First full-custom sprite
« on: May 05, 2009, 04:43:47 PM »
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So I've been trying to create a character for a Castlevania fangame I started working on a few weeks ago, and I was wondering if anyone could help me figure out how to make it look a little less awkward. Here's the most recent version here:


So, any suggestions?

EDIT:Color edit to make the sprite look less nekkid.
EDIT2:Color edit to make the suit look more gold.
« Last Edit: May 05, 2009, 06:07:02 PM by Dio Brando »
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Re: First full-custom sprite
« Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 07:01:22 PM »
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I just think it needs a little more contrast between the colors.

Also the proportions are a bit off unless that was intentional.
« Last Edit: May 05, 2009, 07:06:09 PM by A n t r a x x »

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Re: First full-custom sprite
« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 02:30:38 AM »
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For a custom sprite that's pretty damn good! I don't see any major flaws in the stance, he seems kinda relaxed in the pose. What i would recommend is to utilize some darker coloring for the sections of the sprite that are more in the background.

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