Topic: The Star Ocean Thread: Part Whatever

[X]

The twinkle eyes give her that dazzled look. The empty white eyes remind me of Red Falcon's mutated human soldiers (Don't shoot till you see the whites' of their eyes). I think the red eyes would work when she works herself into a blinding rage. Then she'd go apocalyptic on everything @_@;

[Super Waffle]

http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-x-Star-Ocean-3-The-Visitor-478867953

This is Gunlord's fault.

[X]

LOL!

[Gunlord]

He should have said "BELIEVE IT" before he died T_T

[Super Waffle]

Okay, I honored Gunlord's stupid request for making Naruto say the "Believe it" line.

I still don't understand what difference that makes.

[Gunlord]

It needs to be all caps ~_~

[X]

I guess there's no-pleasing some people 

[Gunlord]

Fine then, let me show you how such a fanfic should be written.

Sophia elsteed (or whatever her last name was) was evil and brainwashed. She came to the Naruto World and killed everyone horribly, erasing them from existence.

"BELIEVE IT!" Naruto screamed, before she decapitated him and then annihilated every trace that he ever existed.

Then Naruto was no more and everyone lived happily ever after.

A SUPER WAFFLE/GUNLORD PRODUCTION

THE END

[Super Waffle]

Isn't that what I wrote?

[Gunlord]

"BELIEVE IT" wasn't in all caps, waffle-kun. That was the most important thing ~_~

[Super Waffle]

Nevermind.

[Super Waffle]

la dee da nothing to see here.

[Super Waffle]

http://chichichichipndale.deviantart.com/art/Star-Ocean-3-The-Hot-Springs-Episode-from-Hell-491508707

I saw your comment on FF.net, Gunlord.  I wish you had given me more feedback than "D:"

"D:" doesn't tell me much.  "D:" doesn't let me know how I can improve as a writer.

[Gunlord]

But the story is a D:...it's tragic T_T

[Super Waffle]

So how can I make it less D:?