Author Topic: CV fangame that needs just one thing to get off the ground (Read 154936 times)

Donoffrio · « **Reply #315 on:** March 17, 2012, 02:25:06 AM »

Yeah..i have..
And i'll prolly be using her hair color for the gloves.Since the sprite has both hair,boots and gloves sharing similar palettes.

On a side note,this is looking awesome,yarr??

Chernabogue · « **Reply #316 on:** March 17, 2012, 04:24:30 AM »

Looks nicer and nicer! Keep up the good work!

Donoffrio · « **Reply #317 on:** March 17, 2012, 12:25:27 PM »

Thanks!
Any suggestions on making it better?

Update:
Dunno weather i'm making it better or worse lol

darkmanx_429 · « **Reply #318 on:** March 17, 2012, 01:28:22 PM »

Quote from: Donoffrio on March 17, 2012, 12:25:27 PM

Thanks!
Any suggestions on making it better?

Update:
Dunno weather i'm making it better or worse lol

Better, the extra lighting gives her more oomph

Donoffrio · « **Reply #319 on:** March 18, 2012, 01:56:26 AM »

Yeah i agree bout the extra lightning..something about her eyes just seemed wrong though.. :x

C Belmont · « **Reply #320 on:** March 18, 2012, 03:40:42 AM »

I think you need to strengthen the lines in your picture some more they look like they are being lost behind the colouring.

X · « **Reply #321 on:** March 18, 2012, 03:49:19 PM »

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I think you need to strengthen the lines in your picture some more they look like they are being lost behind the colouring.

It's true that some of the lines could use straightening, however this is a stylization all on it's own as I have seen it used by others many times.

Kale · « **Reply #322 on:** March 19, 2012, 03:49:47 AM »

I think he means making your line thicker.

KaZudra · « **Reply #323 on:** March 19, 2012, 11:30:48 PM »

you should use something like Pixilr or Photoshop to Make the lines thicker, the coloring is actually really solid, but kinda deludes the main image, Just make a blank layer over your image and trace it with thicker lines (that's the only way I know how to do it)

Corpsecrank · « **Reply #324 on:** March 22, 2012, 03:30:02 PM »

I was just about to say the image is looking smudgy because the lines are being lost in the color. Definitely need darkening at the least to bring back the line detail. I wouldn't necessarily thicken the lines but I would darken them significantly to give them more definition. Outside of that this is pretty good.